by Roronoa Zoro
Submission date : 2012-03-07
TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle ( F P C D )
This is such a truthful poem. Friendships should go both ways, loyalty on both sides with out judgement.
Good write my friend..
Everlasting ( F P C D )
Yeah, I agree. With every action there is a reaction. But I also disagree on a few parts but I prefer to keep that to myself. Everyone has their reasons and well things simply didn't work out. Some times it is better to create some distance and if that's what's better in this case then there is no other option. As far as the poem, it's a good write.
Ruby Red Memories ( F P C D )
What I loved about this piece was how true it was. You had some amazing lines in this poem. My favorite two being
"Every action has a reaction,
Every betrayal has a revenge"