by Ms SunShine
Submission date : 2011-10-17
Rabea Jadallah ( F C D )
Reading this shows me that your heart have not a single ounce of malice, it's full of innocence
full of love,full of care, and full of life,
a heart of gold my friend and for that I feel very proud to be considered your friend
God bless you.
[ Praised by Ms SunShine | Approved by Sherry Lynn ]
Yaki ( F P C D )
Stop taking trips through my mind..
I have been longing to write a poem about people drifting away for each other for a long time,
but thank you for saving me trouble..
now I can just come here and read this...
you are amazing Rania,
you truly are one of the most honest loving people I have ever met in my life..
whenever I read your pieces,Whenever I speak to you,
I'm just in awe..
on what a kind human being you are..
I don't think they even make them as fine as you anymore...
who ever this poem is about,
must consider themself very very lucky..to even having you write about them..
althoug somewhat sad...
this like all others..is just another passage to the corners of your soul...
you shine,sunshine..you really do.
[ Praised by Ms SunShine | Approved by Larry Chamberlin the Godfather ]
Lebanese Phoenix ( F C D )
I got a pocket, got a pocket full of Sunshine :)
TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle ( F P C D )
It's always a pleasure to read your work, to be inspired by your brilliance. A wonderful friend poem,, not mushy or over done, just real and honest..
Alone ( F P C D )
This poem is such a nice and having strong beautiful emotions. though i felt it a bit sad type of poetry. specially second stanza is sad., i really like the way you express every word.