Submission date : 2010-09-14
i want 2 live in a fairytale ( F C )
OMG kris its AWESOME i swear!
The way u expressed ur feelings madd me die 2 meet such a woman seriously!
Love the flow, the feelngs,the love and passion expressed<3
Keep it up
EvanescentMoon ( F P C D )
A very cute and sweet dedication for someone! So sweet of you to have dedicated such piece to a friend. RESPECT!
Loni ( F C D )
You know what sucks? That I can never find a guy who has this kind of perspective. Women are meant to be respected. This is a beautiful piece and I know that many girls on here will really appreciate to see something like this.
The form was a little sloppy but very good choice of wording. Beatifully written. I am happy to see that there are still men out there like you!
PinkyPrincess ( F P C D )
Awww such a beautiful and sweet poem! Whoever you wrote this to is very lucky... It's lovely how we all can connect to our own poetry as well as others. It's such a nice feeling. I really enjoyed your poem :)