Much More!

by Jack Crimson Nightengale

You're sweet and gentle,
A bit rough but not mental.
Beautiful and Kind,
To let you know I'm talking about your mind.

You keep a smile and always stay happy,
Your tenderness and personality makes others look crappy.
When I'm around you, I never feel down,
But if you need me too, I can be your clown.

I glad that I met someone that I can call a true friend,
I hope that this friendship will never end.
I just wanted to open your eyes so that you can see,
That you mean this plus Much more to me!

 

Submission date : 2010-05-03

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iamYOURS at 2010-09-11

Awww this is realllllly sweet. i like it alot.!

XxxbriannaxxX ( F ) at 2010-09-14

This is beautiful, well written.
and shows ALOT of emotions.
great write (:

i want 2 live in a fairytale ( F C ) at 2010-09-15

Lovely<3
i like how u expresed this"A bit rough but not mental"
and i luvvv this one wayyy tooo much "just wanted to open your eyes so that you can see,
That you mean this plus Much more to me! "

keep writingg u r talented i believe!
5/5
lili