True Love

by Hollymariee

Please love , dry your eyes ..
There's no reason for you to cry .
You loved him lots ; I know it hurts ,
But all these tears he's just not worth .

He made his choice , now let him go ;
His mistake , and he'll soon know .
It won't be long , he'll be on his knees ..
But walk away , and ignore his pleas .

The day will come ; Your heart won't ache .
No more nights will you lie awake .
The tears will stop , as the memories cease ;
His name won't hurt , and the pain will ease .

But until the day that all this ends ,
Remember that you've got your friends .
Just take our hand , and we'll help you heal ;
Showing you how true love feels .

Submission date : 2009-02-07
Last edit : 2009-02-11

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Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2009-07-15

I think this was a perfect 'poem' to describe a 'friendship' love is genuine. I felt that you deeply care about your friend...

Anyway

I like the way you used 'caesura' in most lines. (I dunno if that's the correct way of calling it)
- It gives more impact and meaning in the line.

Please love , dry your eyes (..)
There's no reason for you to cry (.)
You loved him lots ; I know it hurts (,)
But all these tears he's just not worth (.)

- The way used a 'space' before you put a punctuation is pretty cool because it's unique. I dunno if its your own style but I like it.

Just take our hand , and we'll help you heal ;
Showing you how true love feels .
- A perfect ending. This sums up the whole 'true love - friendship' bravo.

5/5.

Romeo Cries at 2009-12-05

After reading this i now feel like shit lol. i cheated on the mother of my child. and didnt really think about how she felt. i just dont know how to live with myself. great write!!!! :( lol

Jyoti Rana ( F P C ) at 2011-12-24

WOW WOW

its one of the most true poem. every one should appliy same thing in his life.

I simply love this poem