I was trying to write you a love poem

by Hey Brittknee

I sat here all night thinking, not knowing what to say
and i have come to realize that my writing sucks okay?

I'm no good at writing love poems the words jumble in my hand
because i don't think i can explain love like running barefoot in the sand

so I'm still trying to write you a love poem bet i still sound like a fool
because I'm dorky and silly and just anything but cool

so as you're reading this pen upon paper i bet your smiling cuz you know I'm right
and probably wondering why i keep writing cuz I'm trying with all my might

since I'm so bad at writing you poems ill just get to what i wanted to say
well maybe not in this line of poetry cuz it doesn't rhyme with say

i really really like you that why I'm going to give you my heart
and if you take my heart, please don't break it, or my world will fall apart

Submission date : 2008-06-04
Last edit : 2008-06-04

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