Lucy Vandenberg
at 2008-01-28
I like the way this poem leads you on to finish in a really good ending, a chuckler, well done.
Jaliza
at 2008-01-29
Oh wow, i thought you were talking about a real person, lol good job
Fran ( C )
at 2008-01-30
Nice work Jackie. I bet you're already in love with your new car though lol.
FELTON PHILLIPS ( P C )
at 2008-02-05
I loved it. We all need more to smile and laugh about these days.
Thanks, Jackie.
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2008-03-16
You had me going completely...I mean I was even feeling bad for the "guy". That what a great poem. It's hard to write a piece like this and still keep in flowing and in rhyme. Yours was excellent. Well done, indeed. Billy Rob
Luanne ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-04
So, goodbye dear Henry
I'll try not to cry
As you take your final journey
To the scrap yard in the sky
^^^
I love this ending ... I thought for sure you were writing this about a person ... lol ... very creative twist you've penned in this ode.
Great read!
Luanne
Andrew ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-13
Well you got me with this poem, as i read through i thought otherwise but in the end i got it all.. Really nice work you showcase in this piece
Crystal Rose ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-20
Absolutely wonderful haha
A true piece of entertainment. I really enjoyed this read
Kittens Poems ( P C )
at 2009-03-13
Omg, I loved your poem. I laughed.
Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-26
Oh, this was so much fun!
I think you made a really good poem with this, it cracked me up and it was really well written too!
Take care,
5/5 Ingrid
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-12
Lol I love this. A poem about a car, very unique. 5/5, Em x
Janette
at 2009-10-14
Totally different from your other poems, very good though, I was feeling sorry for Henry until I realised he was a car, lol 5/5
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