Lonely Little Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-21
Awesome poem. I loved it mostly cause its unique. Your word choice was great and painted a beautiful picture of past memories. You also described the feeling so well of nostalgia. The poem had great flow as well and great metaphors. Wonderful job..keep it up! 5/5
Tahniya
at 2007-09-22
Wow this poem is so cool. the words flow really well and it has alot of feeling in it!
iLOVEit!
keep up the great work!!
:)
5/5
Jade ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-22
Hey that was great! It was different and the words you used were very powerful. I was really pulled into that poem... words to critique there arent really any, the flow and emotion was amazing! Keep up the amazing work!
katie
at 2007-09-22
I love this poem
it feels so real
something like this happened to me
Lisa ( C )
at 2007-09-22
This was absolutely beautiful. It was very well written and drug me into it. It actually made me picture myself as that girl. Wonderful job. Keep it up!!!!! 5/5
LivingDesolation ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-30
I saw your poem as beautiful. It was written very well and your poem was filled with metaphors which is always a plus for me. very refreshing.
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