Kristina ( F P C D )
at 2007-09-17
Wow this is a really good poem. i liked it a lot. you did a good job on writing it. keep it up 5/5
~Kristina
Ken ( F P C )
at 2007-09-17
I like this poem alot really good job 10/10* keep up the good work cant wait 2 read more
Cayy
at 2007-09-17
This is great, did you write it yourself?
you should write more =]
xxBaBBlinGXXBrOOkExx3 ( F P C )
at 2007-09-17
I loved the whole entire poem, it flowed nicely and just had a lot of relatable emotion in it...I do suggest though, seperating your lines so its easier on the eyes...but amazing poem!
Brooke<3
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