STEVE ( F C D )
at 2007-05-29
Nice poem very meaningful , i lost my mum when i was 19 and miss her everyday on its real sad Steve
janaynay ( F C )
at 2007-05-29
I liked this poem a lot,, i like how u dedicated it to ur son
Janaynay
Chris plain and simple ( F C )
at 2007-05-29
Im sorry your son is like that. It sounds like how I was a few years ago, but I matured quicker than most people. I realized I owe my mom for raising me to where I am and I should pay her back for it. I hope Michael does for you.
Vino ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-29
This is funny. I like the part when you said straighten your butt up. And WIth that attitude you'll never have a wife. Great job. 5/5
-vino
dawn green ( C )
at 2007-05-29
To answer that yes he can be at times...like right now...but he is the kind of person he very good when he is good and you love him to death. but when he is bad...he is oh sooo bad...thanks for the comments and support! god bless
Marc Ortiz ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-30
A great poem I like the rhyming. Flow was good for me! well done!
Tracy D Rollings ( F P C D )
at 2007-06-03
Excellent poem, love the emotional feeling in it and the story of bring up a child , well told , shows responsibility and respect needs to be learned , great job ,,, your friend Tracy 5/5
Lisa Ann ( F P C )
at 2007-06-16
I love this poem I know what it is like to raise a child and how hard it is
B L Fitzgerald ( C )
at 2007-07-30
This is a well expressed write! Its open and honest and the reader can feel the emotions of the mother. The narrative is steady, your voice never wane, it certainly is consistent throughout this poem. The lack of gratitude and respect you spoke about to your son are the culprit in you son's bad behaviour towards you and you nailed it because you know and love him. Excellent writing!
Blessings, B L Fitzgerald
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