Comments

Finalgravedigger ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-25

THose must be some special kids, nice poem 5/5 OUR CLUB RULES.

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-25

What an original idea to write a haiku about each child. I was trying to think of a way to put my kids to verses...this is indeed unique and very beautiful...well done Sher! All the best, debbie

David ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-25

Naaw this was so sweet. i loved it. i found it excellent and flawless.

5/5 David

Italian Stallion ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-25

Wonderful write Sherry, full of emotion within short and splender lines of poetry. Wonderful job, keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-26

What a wonderful poem. This is so unique. The diffrent personalities of each of your children put in to these lines. Excellent write and very touching.
Take Care Cindy

goran ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-28

Wow, a very nice poem with a unique subject, really shows you are a caring person...............
as always another great poem.

A Brocken soul at 13 ( P ) at 2007-04-29

I love the poem and you must have GREAT kids

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-29

Very good poem, excellent flow, nice use of vocabulary, although I dont think it should be in a friendship poem.

MyPerfectImperfections ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-30

That is so sweet of you! Love this!

Emilio ( P C D ) at 2007-05-02

Ha this was cute idk why but yeah lol keep it up

Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-02

This is so nice and sweet... Very interesting... Great poem!

Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D ) at 2007-05-04

Very sweet poem. Unique and creative...not like a lot of the stuff I've read lately. And i like the idea that it was for your children. May God bless you all! Take care. =]

` Liz =]

Andrea Sunny ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-15

This is a beautiful piece...really pretty...and inspired and pieced together with each one of your kids...Mercy this is pretty....Very nice

Thank You
Andrea
Sunny

donaldrminikus ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-08

I was so mad at my self for not getting home on time to catch you on TV. I came in at the last 5 minuets. But at least I was blessed to be able to see those beautiful children of yours. What a lucky bunch of kids to have a mom with the fortitude and the Love to try and give them every good thing in life. Bless you Sherry Lynn and bless those Beautiful young ones.
Knowing all this made the poem most powerful.

Don

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