Aww, I miss my friend too, even though the wound in my back still bleeds.
poetic passion ( C )
You know what, this is a great poem u are very good at this and i think you should keep up the good work 5/5
I had a friend like that. he turned out to be a REALLY BIG JERK >=[
i luved this poem. it reeally related to meee
Omgosh. Its Like Ur Telling My Life Story Lol. Its Amazing. xx
Quiet Storm ( C D )
I really enjoyed this poem, i can really relate to it.
FANTASTIC IS ALL I CAN SAY. PERFECT. AMAZING!!! YOU ARE SOOOO GOOD.
Juanita ( F )
This is the best poem on here to me! I was so connected that i felt your pain 5/5 =D
I really enjoyed this poem 5/5 i can relate to this keep up the good work
Tabitha ( C D )
I really liked this poem! actually! its perfect.. i wouldn't change a thing!
Oh my goodness i can relate to his so well. ive written a poem like this before, but yours is better and makes complete sense.
makes you wonder what went wrong, eh?
Marylou L ( P C )
Very well written. good job
I know what this is like...to have a best friend walk out on you...i was doing better...and then one day i get a text message and everything comes rushing back...all those nights spent talking and all of our memories...it gets easier but then again it doesnt...especially if they are a person who knows more about you than you do...well written poem...i give you a 5!
El ( P C D )
I loe this pom its so true for me
I love it so much. AMAZING work.
Flirting with suicide
Reminds me so much of the friendship i just lost =[
Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
Do you remember when I reached for your hand?
When you pulled it away, I didn't understand.
You don't remember, but I tell you- I do,
I'm here and I'm waiting, but my friend-
Where are you?
loved these lines.... very touching n emotional... even though my best frnds r still dere wit me i cud feel how it wud be if dey leave me....
the way u hv described d feelings n emotion is excellent... very impressive job...
Mia ( F P )
I know how you feel.. i've lost my best friend to.. i can't even look her in the eyes anymore :_(
anyway this poem is great :)
A poem i can really relate to you. it hurts losing someone you really cared and loved so much for.
have faith girl.
Krystal Castelly ( F )
Omg I actually started crying halfway through this because of how much it reminded me of the friend that I lost.
Becca ( F C D )
Woah. thats incredible.
keep up the amazing work. :)