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*Stars Will Shine* at 2007-02-26

Definitly not traditional, and in that aspect can be looked at from a different perspective and reasoning. I like this poem a lot, many of the lines got right down into my heart and pushed me onward through the poem such as :
"It was a long time ago,
So why hide,
Why regret?
I was just small.
I was not tortured at all."
&
"I remember his "HI's",
I remember his cries.
I remember everything...
It brought tears to my eyes.
I loved that boy dearly,
Now I felt it so clearly.
Now I miss him.
My bestfriend...
I forgot all about him.
I was lucky to have him.
Even so to think of him.
I just wish him back.
Just so slowly,
So I can quickly bring him back."

Those lines hit me the most and they were great, I look forward to reading more of your work!

-Emia Rose