Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-06
Wow Britt, that was really good. I loved it. You are really good at short styles of poetry, keep up the wonderful work.
Peace, Joe
Laura ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-06
Oh la la Britt bringing down tha house with her poetical words...this was a sweet dedication...very deep, loved it!
♥SoSickOfTears♥ ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-07
AWWWWWWWH!!
This was so0o cute!!
I loved this one, it's one of my favourites.
Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-07
Aw this is so sweet. The repeating lines were perfect in this poem. At first I thought it was going to be about love when you gave me the title, but this is a lot more refreshing and new. Very well written. And such a sweet topic, about ur friends baby. Nice job, thanx for sharing with us
Silver J ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-07
This seems like one of those you get in a greetings card...it's that readable.
I love the triolet, I used it once, but it didn't turn out all that well, this is good though.
Thanks for sharing.
becca ♥ ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-07
Cute poem... the flow was great as well as the rhyme.. unique by baby blues i was thinking of blues as sadness .. great job!
goran ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-07
Wow, i totally love this poem, very nicely written.
keep up the great work with your this great talent.
x.Athame.x ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-08
What I love about this piece is that when it says 'Baby Blues' it doesn't say what that is referring to. Now in my mind I think, blue eyes, but it is for every reader to decide. This type of poetry is incredibly hard to write [I know] and this is spectacularly done. Wonderful, wonderful job. *5/5
Darien ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-08
Argh, you and your formed poetry I am so jealous! Lol, I really liked this poem, the rhymes were really good. This was a very nice dedication Britt, keep on writing, and thank you for the title. I think it suits my poem well!
::TheFireInMyEyes:: ( F C D )
at 2007-02-08
I think this is the third triolet I've read today. I haven't really seen this a whole lot til now. This one though, is beautiful. My fav. triolet lol. you really wrote this well. Wonderful read! 5/5
marcella
**MIMI** ( P )
at 2007-02-12
Thats is a wonderful poem, the repeated lines are very effective. you are a very good at writing. every piece of your poetry i have read is always fantastic.
David Wallace ( F P C )
at 2007-02-12
Beautifully written and well done.
-anti-depression- ( F P C D )
at 2007-02-15
Cute poem
in.need.of.a.lucky.charm ( F P C )
at 2007-03-01
Ooh i loved this, i really loved the words, "baby blues"
well done huni
much love and many kisses,
bex
Brittney Schmelter ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-02
This definitally deserves a 5. Its is also very cute. :) I didn't notice that there was repeated lines.. I don't like repeated it lines.. it annoys me.. anyways I didn't even notice it until I read the description of a triolet. Very good! Your poem was amazing. .. I also noticed on your pro you said you can't edit... bummer. Well I would have said you should actually put puncuation in it... commas periods.. you know .. but I guess you can't
Great Write
5/5
Perfection ( F C D )
at 2007-03-02
Its pretty cool that you can actually write something with such deepth and meaning and also follow a specifik way of writing...
BriBri [x] ( F P C D )
at 2007-03-06
Awwe. That was beautiful. It had a lot of meaning in it. It was very deep & powerful.
Absolutley beautiful.
Bri x
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