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My.Love.4.u.is.endless ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-04

This was a nice short poem, but i think if you give it more of a twist and make the rhyming not so simple, it would read a lot easier and sound better. Just give it a bit of a mature touch, thats what i think, Good job:)

***A*** ( C ) at 2007-06-12

I think u did a good job on this poem. i loved it. 5/5 :-)))

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