jo
at 2006-07-04
Hay i think that is a really good poem and i like it very much.
Poetress*of*FiRe ( F C D )
at 2006-07-06
Beautiful job, great rhymings as well.
Arcane Blondie ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-10
Sweet poem----I like the topic and the emotion in it about leaving a friend and then getting to see them again---The flow is great! Amazing write-5/5
♥Samantha Hollywood ( F C D )
at 2006-07-10
STEPHY!!!!!!
This was soo great! I can definitely relate to this, I feel as if I wrote this poem! It describes me soo well! You`re an amazing writer, keep it up! You really convinced me that you can write about anything -- I`m going to add you to my faves list [ if you`re not already on it ]
Thanks,
Sam
Bridgette ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-10
That is a really sweet poem. So very heartfelt and filled with so much emotion. My favorite stanza was;
We went onto high school,
Our middle school memories, a distant daze,
I remember the drama, the fights,
From our long gone junior days
Yeah, I remember all the drama of middle school, but it's seemed to follow me into high school. But this is a really good poem. I'm sure that many people can relate to it, and it has a nice rhythm and flow to it. Great job on this! 5/5
*Danielle* ( C D )
at 2006-07-10
Awww this one is sweet! loved it!
.×.Nαtαlie.×. ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-10
But, tonight, here we are together,
I never thought Id see you again,
The memories come flooding back,
And I remember why you were my friend.
[Loved that stanza. It was more than great!]
I really liked this poem. Even though I got the drift that it's about leaving primary school to go to highschool, it reminded me more of when I had to leave my highschool and leave my friends behind. {I was expelled} So yesh. I thought this was a wonderful poem! Keep the awesome work up babe! 5/5
`Taleee. xx.
Tara-Kay ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-16
This was absolutely awesome, i love friendship poems, and i loved this one so much, i can relate as some of my close friends, i have not seen in years and I miss them.
keep writing my friend
xxxxxxx
Sarah White ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-16
Seems to end rather abruptly, and that's a shame because it left me expecting more. Try not to let your readers down. You don't really need the comma's at the end of each line, but overall, nice poem.
Sole ( F P C D )
at 2006-07-19
Wow. I feel I can relate to this a lot, but not at such an extreme scale. Very nice work - the rhymning and flow were perfection.
Peace. [Sole]
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