жshadowspoetж ( F P C D )
at 2006-06-10
Great penned, simply but beautiful ended, keep them coming and thanks for your nice comment, have a great weekend, take care.
...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS... ( F C )
at 2006-07-17
That was very beautiful & sweet, Nadia! Actually it cheered me up, thanks! Well the rhyme was very well achieved and I loved the whole poem, although I thought it would turn differently in the last verse to end with something like" and that friend, my dear, is me". Anyway, keep writing!
Best wishes,
TILLmyLASTtearFALLS =)
NEVERlovedFORreal ( C )
at 2007-06-18
Gd
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-26
This just made me smile while reading it. Its
good to have friends whom you can rely on
as well as make your day bright. Good write!
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