The Ghost of You ( F C D )
at 2006-03-10
Wow that is a really deep and thoughtfull poem, keep writing!!
L.S. Moore ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-14
Oh My God its a great poem 5/5. I do think you should fix the typos. Its great, Oh did I tell you its great. LOL....
Juls ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-19
Wow, thats intense. Great work I enjoyed reading it. The flow of this poem is great, it really got my attention. Sorry if this really happened to you.
Juls
Mona ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-19
God.. I really don't know what to say. It's such a sad poem. It's so emotional. I can really tell you gave this poem your all. So many feelings in this, so much pain.
It's very nice written. But I feel so bad when I say that, cause .. dam.. I'm sorry I don't know what to say..
Blah.. sorry.. speechless...
Glad you shared your feelings with us..
Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-
Kaylee Rose ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-07
It's really deep and emotional *and shows us how society has been going up and downhill* with fantastic organization. Some of the line sran a bit long but they still were alright. You might want to check some of your tenses. Other than that, it really is a sad poem that had my complete attention while reading it.
Italian Stallion ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-08
Wow, amazing Job. I loved it. This is a very emotional poem. great Job!
Latasha ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-08
Omg this is is so touching... it pretty much brung tears to my eyes.. and i know its a hard concept to over come!
Purple ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-08
Great poem, flowed, made more sense then must things I write. I want to yell at my brother for looking over my shoulder and reading Latasha's comment in a ioitic voice. This poem seems to demand greater respect. It tells a story, and well. It's good to hear of some ones servival through a horrible hell.
Fallen ( F C D )
at 2006-04-14
An excellent poem indeed. You have really brought the story of your past to life in this poem; making it atmospherically enjoyable- but emotionally heart breaking.Overall, great job.
Much love and God bless,
Fallen.
Kat ( F C )
at 2006-04-15
This is really deep. it flows all well together. its really sad but you captured it really well.
Kat
Marissa
at 2006-04-19
WOW! Man that's so deep!! I'm so truly sorry if this really happened to you! I do agree with L.S. Moore though. You do need to work on those mistakes, but other than that, it's a great poem. Sad too!! Keep writing. I give you top ratings on this poem.
Take care cause I care!! You'll be in my prayers!!
Marissa
xXConfusedXx ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-22
Wow..I am left..Like SPEACHLESS..it was soo good..it brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful job..top rating defeniatly..
Đįşşოіńģ.·°¨´¨°· ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-23
Deep what other word can say it.. that is so strong.. you must have had it hard but it seems like you love your dad best of wishes!
-Rachel 5/5
Łøşŧ+Ħøpĕş+Ćŗĩmşøń ( F P C D )
at 2006-05-02
Great work again... really nice!
♥;;-Band-Aid-;;♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-06-01
That's really sad. A good poem though. Just really sad, I enjoyed it. Great Job.
*Wishes do come true* ( C D )
at 2006-08-27
Wow thats a powerful poem...but its real good but real sad...
LuvSuxGetDrunk ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-23
Really sad, but beautifully epressed, full of heartfelt emotion. Another 5/5
Live, Laugh, Love ( F P C D )
at 2006-10-01
Like the other you put tears in my eyes. I'm sorry your father was this way. He doesn't deserve to be a father. Keep your head up. Keep writing because sometimes that is the only thing that will help
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