Mark ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-11
Sounds a little like me not too long ago..
It's hard to quit, so just try to get him to and he might.
Josh Webster
at 2006-02-15
Nice, ive known this to happen to so many ppl arround me, but sometimes u got to try not to loose friends over it, just stick by cos they might need the help...
ThatEmoKid ( F P C )
at 2006-02-21
Thnk you so much..for commentin on my poems..i lik you poem too..so yeah..i brok my finger.s.o i cant type well..but thank you very much..
nick
ThatEmoKid ( F P C )
at 2006-02-22
Thank you again, for commeting on my poems.. I used to have this site, but then I had to get anew one.so all my old stuff is gone.. but on my other site..so these poems are kinda new..i can type alittle today whohoo..bcz i took off my spilt..so yeah very good poem keep it up..
nick
ThatEmoKid ( F P C )
at 2006-02-22
Yes I spend all my time on the computer..when i have time..which i do..sometimes..so yeah..bcz i dont have a compter at home...and i keep all my comments..i like comments lol
so yeah peace
♥ Trust me Im Fine &heart ( F P C )
at 2006-02-27
Hey its me nick.. *thatemokid*
I changed my name..any ways whats up..ttyl hopeffuly..
nick
Drew Pieper
at 2006-03-01
Really fricken good.... nicely put
Untouchable_Angel ( F C )
at 2006-03-01
I like this poem..Reminded me of my brother...Which my brother passed on..He got shot....Because of the path he dicided to choose..If this is true..Alll i can say is be there for him adn try to make him decide that its the wrong path..Let him make his mind up...But help him choose
♥ Trust me Im Fine &heart ( F P C )
at 2006-03-01
I wish she felt the same way..as i feel about her
Katt ( C )
at 2006-03-03
Exellent poem, I like the ryming! It is sad that your friend turned out that way. I hope you can help him turn his life around or he gets help.
Bradley Peter ( F P C )
at 2006-03-06
I liked the subject and i was particularly taken with the title. my favorite part though has to be the last two lines. they were powerful, intelligent and brilliant. well done and keep it up won't you?
Brad
P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem 'Bird Sh*t', as all comments are appreciated.
P.P.S. no, sadly the story wasn't true. sorry
Luke ( F P C D )
at 2006-03-08
Aww This Poem Is Really sweet.. And The Flow And Rhymes Are Really Well Done.
;)
Keep It Up.
*stuck in the past* ( F P C )
at 2006-03-09
Hey! awesome poems!!
keep it up hun!
thanks for the comment!!
take care
kat
~*cutie_pie_4eva*~(nadia) ( F C )
at 2006-03-11
I lyked dis..awsum work..love dia mwaz xoxo...keep it up
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