BrokenMortie © ( F P C D )
OMG WOW!!!!!!! Okay, tears on my cheeks :*(**** lol....wow, this is just...well, for one, it's absolutely brillliiaaannntttttt....secondly...it's so SAD omg....*sorry* lol. Wow. You're a freaking awessommeee writer hun. *makes room for you on my favorites* =D I love you. Lovely work...completely stunned...Great job...I hope it never happens to anyone either..such a sin =( there were like 3 verses that really, really hit me...I think this one the most cos I can relate..:
""What's wrong", you're always asked
You return with the same reply
"Nothing, I'm okay..." said with
a disheartened twinkle in your eye"
Awesome...you're really talented! <3 I can't wait to read more =) xxxxxx
~*~Rachael~*~ ( F P C )
That was really sweet....everyone should have a friend like you...you gave some very good advice...excellent job!
Gosh!!! This poem brought tears to my eyes. You are a very talented writer and you should try to get this one published. I think a lot of people could relate to it.
Natalie84 ( F P C D )
WHOA! Excellent write. I loved every single bit of it. Truly an amazing piece. :)
♥Christina♥ ( F P C D )
Nice poem! It flowed very nicely!
*Star~Eyes*Ann ( F P C D )
rolo, this was absolutely written so beautiful. A pleasure to read. Loved the flow and the wording.....superb. hugs, love, Ann
Alyssa ( F C )
Hey this poem is really good. Good Job.
JJ ( F C D )
beautiful job! you're an amazing writer
your poem has a soul. keep up the good work.
=Eirisa= ( F P C D )
So true Rolo, life is a gift that can be taken from us at any given time, its so important to tell our loved ones how we feel about them, what they mean to us and how they have impacted on our lives. Great write I really enjoyed it!
If only I told you everything that I felt,
And if only you knew of all my love
Then maybe you'd be my angel on Earth
Instead of an angel flying up above
Boy do i know how that feels... RIP Erin.
This poem meant alot to me and i just want to say thankyou.
Kymberly ( F D )
That poem is so awsome...Keep it up , your good =D
milou ( F C )
It's so beautifull.. I get tears in my eyes
I regconise a friend of mine in it
awesome...that was a really good poem...Keep up the good work...
Luanne ( F P C D )
Awesome !!!!!!!is all I can say I'm speachless 5/5
That is such an amazing poem with such a heartfelt meaning*** I read this poem and it showed me to tell my best friend how im feeling, as shes going through a rough tym @ the mo, so thankz!!!!
undying blusher ( F P C D )
That is worded so well and so beautiful and meaningful...
I believe you should tell your friends (and other loved ones) how much they mean to you, too...before it's too late...what a wonderful message, I would be proud of it too...very proud... and I just love the idea of Earth angels...they are all around, but sometimes no one notices really...or just don't say anything...
starlight ( F C D )
Wow this is great, it has a really good message. I love your style.
Andrew Kirkman ( F P C D )
This is a great poem with an invaluable meaning. Another great job. Well Done
JLT ( F P C )
Awwww, Britt! It's beautiful. It's so sad. :( It brought tears to my eyes. It also made me realize that i should tell my friends how much they mean to me more often... This is an amazing poem and it was written by the most awesomest Britt in the world! :) I love you. Keep writing or i'll beat you up! Hehe *huggles*