=Eirisa= ( F P C D )
at 2005-04-14
Awww this was divine and so beautiful to write for your mum - I hope my boys think of me in the same aspect - really enjoyed your poem keep up the great work my friend :o)
Much Love, One Love -Eirisa-
Samantha Dill
at 2005-04-14
wow....that is amazing...if i were u i would give it to my mom...i seriously am amazed by that...ur a GREAT writer
Suzie
at 2005-04-15
Your poem was awsome. You should definateally give it to your mama. Like one night while shes already asleep put it on the kitchen table with a rose or something like that and she'll see it when she wakes up. She'll love it. I've done it to my mama b4. It makes them know that what they do for us is really appreciated even though we dont show it everyday. Well good luck with that. (That was a beautiful poem.)
stormy ( F P C D )
at 2005-04-15
Most definately give her this. It is so beautiful, extremely loving and wow...just beautiful. A most excellent poem. Your mom will laugh, cry and the smiles will never stop, I know, I'm a mom and I know how I would feel if mine had wrote this and presented it to me. Awesome work....be very proud. Wish I could give more than 5. Take Care and bless your loving heart.
Ashley DiAnn
at 2005-05-08
aaaw this is such a sweet poem!!!!!!
tessa johnston ( F C )
at 2005-08-24
OMG... that is awesome, only a few ppl care that much about there mom, to say words like that. and it is deffinitly a great poem... keep it up u have some real talent and i dont say that alot!
*keep smiling*
`~*Tessa*~`
Alicia Jane ( P C )
at 2008-01-26
I think u shud give it to her for mothers day in a card :]
anways this is really sweet,
:] i remember writtin something for my mum, but i never ended up givin her it cause i didnt want them to know that i wrote, then in the nail she read that my poem was going to be put ina book so now i have to hide everything i write Lol. :]
xx
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