Comments

bluehun ( F C ) at 2005-01-29

I LIKE THAT ONE.well written,5/5

SAVEME at 2005-01-30

great poem. thanks for the comment

**Stary_nights** ( F C ) at 2005-04-22

aww this is really adorable:) i really loved it!! excellent job..definately a 5/5...no doubt abotu that. thank you so much for you comment on my poem. i really appreciate it!!~ take care~
*Brittany*

ж♥жD£ċ£a§£d¤Aήg£lж� at 2005-04-28

thanks alot greatly appreciated comment/vote thanks. anyway another wonderfully writne poem u got talent keep this up and youll go far!! 5/5

~~Love~~
XxKIKIxX

Becky ( F C D ) at 2005-05-01

thanks for commenting on some of my poems i really appriciate it! this is a great poem deffinatly a 5/5 keep writing! i enjoy reading all your poems
*-Becky-*

Hannah M. ( C D ) at 2005-05-11

That was a really great poem. Very cute and touching. I loved it, keep it up.
~HaNNah~

Freak ( F C D ) at 2005-05-11

its really good but lose the caps.
5/5
~Freak~

BrokenAngel43 ( F P C D ) at 2005-05-11

aww this was so sweet i really loved it! Nice job!

Baby B ( F P C D ) at 2005-05-11

Wow this is amazing and I am sure many can relate to this poem. You put a lot of feeling into it I can tell. Great job
Oh and thank you for commenting on my poem :-)

Sticker fish at 2005-05-14

that poem brought a smile to my face and a litlle tear to my eye i really like it ¤Elisha¤ aka sticker fish

Sherry Lynn ( F P C D ) at 2005-05-17

That is so nice. I like the fact that this piece is open for the reader to imagine who it is written to.

Is it written for a mate or lover, or is it written for a parent or child. I love that there is no concrete person to recieve this.

Excellent job!

--Sher

Darien ( F P C D ) at 2005-06-23

If i had friends like you..
I wouldnt need a girlfriend..
hahaha awesome poem :)

♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥© ( F P C D ) at 2005-06-24

:) Thanx! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

abcede ( F P C D ) at 2005-06-26

wow.. great poem!!! the repeditive aspect of the beggining of each line adds such an awesome creativity!!! great job

Shawn Williams at 2005-07-13

scarey but good

.. !!-D a R r i N-!! .. ( C D ) at 2005-08-05

i kno you was Thankin bouh Me wen you wroTe dis poeM Lol.. nahh Buh iz hella Good doe... all yo poems iz..10/5 niKkaz... Das whaS reaL Good...

Nikki ( F P C ) at 2005-08-09

This is amazing you did a great job. Keep it up 5/5 much luv

~Nikki~

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-07

Very nice poem but the caps "ouch' they hurt . Much is left to the imagination of the reader I really like that . Keep up the great work

Ashley Patterson ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-26

Beautiful poem. I don't have much to say otherwhise. It was great.

¤.::.~§Gizmo§~.::.~¤ ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-27

I wish i had something like this...this was a beautiful poem. another great write, and another 5/5