Michael D Nalley TC ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-09
A very deep poem with original style which I really like a lot
Gasttlee ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-15
Seems more like love than friendship, but it's deep & greatly written. The imagery is vivid & appealing.
Karl Wild ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-19
The first 4 lines are incredibly strong, especially the first line. I loved how you used "alabaster wrist" at the end it was the perfect way to start this poem. "And who but she that shines like this" I feel that way about my fiancee... nothing in the world can compare to her. Excellent job once again although fairly short much deserving of a 5/5
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