Stephanie Michelle ( F C ) at 2010-02-09 I think you wrote this really well. Great job with imagery and word choice! It's a sad write but true in many cases. 5/5
Kuro ( F P C D ) at 2010-03-02 I liked the message your were trying to express. it also has a bit of a transition in it which is cool. and you had nice rhyming. great job ~Kuro
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