Comments

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-24

Such a sweet, emotional poem. Good job and well written, 5/5. Em x

Marcus blake ( F P C ) at 2009-09-25

I dig it but next time try to give a poetic format i feel like I'm reading a letter but still good poem 5/5

Directly Implied ( F C D ) at 2009-09-28

I think you have a lot of talent.
You should write more and a poetic format will help a lot.
Keep writing

Max Krakers ( F P C ) at 2009-09-30

You've got tallent, but also plenty of room to grow.
the poem itself was lovely, a bit short but that's not realy important now is it. One thing I would advice you to do though, is change the way it looks. use more blank spaces and it will look a lot more enticing to potential readers.

all in all, a great effort and a decent poem. keep writing and never let anyone tell you that you're not tallented.

greets max

siham ( C ) at 2009-10-14

So nice poem , i really like it alot
keep it up :)

beekrazee at 2009-10-23

I loved your poem! :) Good Work!!

BraidhairCutie ( C ) at 2009-11-13

NICE!...Short but u got the point out. :)

Jackie ( C ) at 2009-12-16

This is a very sweet poem:]
i rlly liked it but i would have loved for it to b a little bit longer
i enjoyed reading it:)
very well written:)
5/5

Jackie ( C ) at 2009-12-16

This is a very sweet poem:]
i rlly liked it but i would have loved for it to b a little bit longer
i enjoyed reading it:)
very well written:)
5/5

Jackie ( C ) at 2009-12-16

This is a very sweet poem:]
i rlly liked it but i would have loved for it to b a little bit longer
i enjoyed reading it:)
very well written:)
5/5

Britany Hegwood at 2009-12-16

Thanks lol

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