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dollwithafrown ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-07

I never feel right trying to critique somebody's poem when it's about loss, especially such a personal loss as this one was. The poem was absolutely beautiful and I'm sure your nan can read it and is very proud of you.

I'm so sorry for your loss and just keep your chin up. I find writing has always helped me through my most sad times, so I hope your poetry can help you, too. :)

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-07

Thank you dollwithafrown :) x

Andrew ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-08

Touching words, working together to build an amazing poem. Losing someone is one of the hardest things to deal with, when I lose someone in whatever way, I pray for the best ahead and treasure our lovely past. Nice poem and I know wherever Nan is, I believe he/she misses you too.

Jarred ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-14

An amazing poem! So heartfelt and full of emotion, worded nicely - with a story that most of us can relate to ( with the exception of kids ), it is never easy when a relative passes away.

I wouldn't rate this any other than 5/5, excellent work :)

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