Comments

Nowhere Man ( F P C ) at 2009-08-23

That was so sweet... I like the fourth stanza hehe... 5/5

Dave ( F C D ) at 2009-09-21

I like the repetition of the starting line with each stanza. The poem had a nice flow and I love the message! It's good to be there for friends.
Dave.

Cassandra at 2009-10-24

Wow, this is a really nice poem. It's almost how I would describe myself. I love helping people and giving people advice...though I can't really rely on anyone but myself. Mainly because every time I'd ask for help people wouldn't. That's just the way the world is these days. -sigh-

lostlove1 ( F C D ) at 2009-11-17

It was real serious until #4 stanza then I chuckled. It was a nice rhyme flowed well. nice job