Comments

bluehun ( F C ) at 2009-09-01

Luvn it awwww wish we never lost contact, so much ive missed,DONT LEAVE AGAIN OK ...LOL, YES THATS A SHOUT

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-01

Haha I won't this time, promise ;) x

lostlove1 ( F C D ) at 2009-09-03

Beautiful poem decribing the love you have for your daughter. very visual...took me back to the times when my girls were babies.
Thanks for the walk down memory lane!

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-03

Thank you for the comment :) x

XxBrokenInsidexX ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-19

This brung my chills. i have goosebumps on my arms (:
ive had this feeling but only for a short time...you are so lucky and i would give anything to hold my son again. :/
beautiful emotions your poems bring!

Hellie at 2009-09-21

It really shows the beautiful mother love that you have, well written love.
xx

Lynn at 2009-10-11

Love the poem, i like how you describe the emotion smoothly. 5/5!

Amena ( F C ) at 2009-10-25

What a beautiful poem.. you should let your daughter read it one day when she becomes an adult 5/5 beautiful written

Xx My Personal Prison xX ( F P C ) at 2009-11-17

You gave me goosebumps,
Im sure you are a lovely mother
to her :)

Great write;
5/5,
Renee.

Xx My Personal Prison xX ( F P C ) at 2009-11-17

You gave me goosebumps,
Im sure you are a lovely mother
to her :)

Great write;
5/5,
Renee.

LadyLk ( F C D ) at 2009-11-18

Awwww so sweet, she will love to read this when she gets older!!
5/5

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