Comments

Nobodys Hero ( F C D ) at 2009-07-06

This is really good, Both your writting fits perfectly together and flows very well into each stanza =] You kept me interested throughout the piece as it progressed, overall an excellent job you both have produced a very good collab

Dirctly Implied ( F C D ) at 2009-07-09

I thought this was very well written. The words chosen were touching and emotional.
How quickly a friendship can turn, dissolve before our eyes and the reason isn't always clear. Our hearts break and we go on.

Maya ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-07

This is really well written, very sad and bitter at some points and clearly from a point in life where things like "being cool" still matter.
I never cared for that, being "cool" and never was..I saw the ones who were carrying this heavy burden of always having to live up to that picture and felt glad I didn't feel the need.

A good read, I enjoyed it much:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid