Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-01
Steve
It hurts when someone you care about and thought was your friend turns out to be someone you didn't even know.
You acted on a whim,
to turn your back
upon me and without
thought cast me out.
People like this end up being old, and alone.
Great job on this poem.
Love and Hugs
Cindy
Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-04
It does hurt when a friend turns their back on you but if that is the case, they were not a true friend to begin with. Well done.
Anna Stephens ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-04
Ahhhh Steven, you have made my lips laugh and my heart sing!!!!!!!
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-08
It's sad sometimes that people have to go through such hurt. Your write shows that and when the hurt and discarded band together they will stand tall.
Steven Beesley ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-18
Whatever you dare accuse me of I will reiterate again it is purely that of an over vivid imagination. The poem was written about a lost friendship and nothing to do with attacks on clubs or people and no matter how many times you choose to delete this comment it will reappear as it is the truth and you cannot silence me from speaking .
You have a right to speak and so do I.
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