Polaroid ( F P C D )
at 2008-12-13
That poem was A-MAZING! (3 sylables) I really loved the word use, and everything about it, it depicted a story and a feeling, very well done.
Happy Christmas!
Kayl ( P C )
at 2008-12-14
I really like this one, i can feel the anxiety of it all and i can relate
Dave ( F C D )
at 2009-09-15
Sounds like a case of unrequitted Love.... although you have nothing to loose by simply asking them if they have any interest in you. Nicely written piece! If it's based on reality.... just tell him, why not? :0) Dave.