Goth marionette ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-12
Nice poem...It's so sweet of u to write such a poem as a dedication for ur friend...
I liked it and I wish ur friend will be better soon God willing...
*Hugs*
waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-12
You know...i wasn't in the mood to read and comment any poem these past weeks but your poem has refreshed my mind and feelings
thank you
GREAT POEM
Frenchy ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-12
This was a very sweet and awesome poem u gave ur friend.. I love it.. Amazing job..
I truly hope ur amiga willl get better.. keep up the awesome job. =)
Loni ( F C D )
at 2008-08-12
Aww. Well this friend of yours is very lucky to have someone like you. This poem is very strong and powerful Heba. I love it.
Open up your heart for me
Throw away it's lock
Reveal to me your darkest secrets
Push off your chest that solid rock
^^Favorite line in the whole poem! Why? Because the word choice in this stanza alone, makes this poem strong and powerful
Excellently written my friend! I gave a 5:)
MauLiCiouSss ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-13
A very sweet and touching dedication to your friend..One thing is for sure, she is definitely lucky to have you as a friend..Good job..
Dark Secrets ( F C D )
at 2008-08-13
I feel the same way...
I wish I could help her.
May allah be by her side.
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-13
You are not consistent with the flow or the structure of each stanza in this piece. Your rhyming is forced. A thoughful dedication though....
Dave ( F C D )
at 2008-08-15
The true measure of a friend is what they do for you when things aren't so rosey in life. You obviously rate a 5/5 for your resolve as a friend and for this wonderful poem, Dave.
islam
at 2008-08-16
Its an awsome poem miss Heba Really brillent onee, and if i were ur friend then i'd be better at once :) inshallah she will be fine ... urs Islam ...
nour ( F C D )
at 2008-08-17
Wish ur friend gets better soon..yeah she IS lucky 2 hav a loyal friend..cute poem :)..keep it up!!
shermeen
at 2008-08-18
ASSALAM O ALIKUM .Really a hrt touching poem.nicely written .i thinks that urs frnd is so lucky.bcuz she has so caring and loving friend.Hibba.i am right na
Sasha Hikal ( F P C D )
at 2008-08-25
Mashallah. This is very sweet. You are obviously a very good friend and she is very lucky to have you. Its hard to find a friend like that.
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