Franc Capella
at 2008-07-09
Didnt realize you were so talented...
huggs we bro.
Belle ( F P C )
at 2008-07-18
"But i looked up to see,
A brother who cared for me,"
I think this is the best line in your poem. It seems to have a lot of feeling in it. Bravo on a job well done!
Crystal Rose ( F P C D )
at 2008-07-18
A special sibling bond, it's to bad some lose that over time. I have one sister that our bond only gets stronger.
this was well penned with true feeling. Creative use of words . Delightful over all
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-29
A bond between brothers and sisters is a strong bond indeed. Little brothers are so pesky when they are small...but then they grow into those handsome men that look over us and protect us. Great poem!
Take care
Cindy
keithnwv ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-21
Time has a way of slipping by to quickly. All we have to hold on to are distant memories of our childhood. The smiles, laughter, and tears, all things that made us who we are today. Thanks for giving me something to make me reflect on those times.
Ali
at 2009-08-07
Wow amazing poem, loved it:) your super good. i loved readign your peoms, very well written
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