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Broken Wings of a Forgotten Ange at 2008-06-03

Beautiful. Very good! (^3^)

Loni ( F C D ) at 2008-06-05

Omg that was so sweet! That made me want to cry! You presented your message so well!! 5/5 Awesome job!

BreakeR ( F ) at 2008-06-09

Well... do you know the feeling that makes your hand hair stand up and say peace :P thats what happened to me , i like it , thats realy nice and full of emotions and strong feelings , 5/5 a.t

JUSTme dora ( F C ) at 2008-10-07

Awww alisha, its really sad when a friend moves away. ive had two friends move away, one of them ill never see again....
you poem kinda saddened me a little, it was really touching especially ur ending. u did a good job. 5/5

RAWR ( C ) at 2008-10-22

I'm sorry your friend had to leave. I'm sure you will stay friends forever though. Don't blame her mum. She obviously had a good reason.

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