Andrew ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-21
I really like your poem, it flows very well and the rhymes make it even better. I like the way the blessings keep coming with every statement, a nicely penned friendship poem that i wish could be addressed to me ^_^... Excellent work.
xXMr AnonymousXx ( F P C )
at 2008-04-21
Loved the rhyming, and the flow was amazing- so glad you wrote another one, great job
xoOrdinaryGirlox ( F C D )
at 2008-05-06
#3
I'm speechless. Your love for your friends must be great. So touching. There is nothing I can fault about it. Beautifully written piece. 5/5
Colors Of The Heart ( F P C )
at 2008-07-04
This was trulely beautiful. very unique. i also noticed in the beginning stanza's you rhymed the 1st and 2nd lines then you went to the 2nd and 4th one's towrds the end. i must say i never seen a poet write like that before, but it fit the poem quite well.
job well done.
5/5.
-Ashlei.
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