Comrade Mo ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-08
AH! I know how you feel! That hit it perfectly! I honestly felt that one deep down. I love how simple it was, but yet how full of feeling it was.
It all flowed so nicely, and there werent any rocky patches! great job!
Luanne ( F P C D )
at 2008-04-10
Why do you hate me?
why do you ignore me,
push me away when you're
with them?
^^^
To be ignored is one of the most hurtful things. To hold us close when alone then push us away while in the presence of others hurts not only our hearts but .... our spirit as well
We soared over worlds,
to adventures untold,
where no one could
hold us back.
^^^^
This stanza speaks of the beautiful memories ... and to have them crushed is heartbreaking
Now your gone,
leaving me alone
to find my way
once you met
them.
^^^
Gosh I remember the times so well when a friend (well one I thought was a friend) would get swept away by a new boyfriend and our friendship dwindled.
Such heartbreak your words echo.
Thank you for your comment and welcome to P&Q ... hope you enjoy the site. If you need anything feel free to ask
Luanne
I miss you ( F P C )
at 2008-05-16
This a meaningful poem....Yet again simple...good job
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